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  • Hi, Beligma! Nice vocabulary!

    And would you like to become a blogger (like the ones you mentioned) yourself? 

    The vocabulary you used was quite challenging, so I believe it shifted your attention from the grammar a bit. Here are some notes for you if you don’t mind: pay more attention to the articles (you left the noun “designer” without it). And also the phrase goes “work as”, not “work like”. And, ofc, “while they ARE smiling”.

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